I received a chance to reshoot my breakfast shot for Chuck. I decided to go with a baked breakfast good that nobody else in the class used. Mr. Cinnamon Roll, you are oh so delicious. (Left = before, Right = after)
Ooooh wow! Surprisingly enough, I like this one even more than the first. I know the only reason you re-did was for the compositional issues, but I feel that it gave you a second chance to learn and create something even more beautiful. Everything happens for a reason and holy cow, that pastry looks delectable!! The additional fruit also does nothing but help. My only suggestion to you would be to somehow clean up the reflections in the glass and the streaks of light coming through it. It's a tad distracting.
Thank you Miss Cali! Yes. I planned on cleaning it up. This was just my unedited one that I put up here just to see what people thought. So thank you for being honest! :)
This is really good, and better than the first. I really like the composition and the hard, long shadows that show the lighting was low and morning like. I also really like that I can see the texture in the cinnamon roll. great job.
Ooooh wow!
ReplyDeleteSurprisingly enough, I like this one even more than the first.
I know the only reason you re-did was for the compositional issues, but I feel that it gave you a second chance to learn and create something even more beautiful. Everything happens for a reason and holy cow, that pastry looks delectable!! The additional fruit also does nothing but help.
My only suggestion to you would be to somehow clean up the reflections in the glass and the streaks of light coming through it. It's a tad distracting.
Good work, Miss!
Thank you Miss Cali! Yes. I planned on cleaning it up. This was just my unedited one that I put up here just to see what people thought. So thank you for being honest! :)
ReplyDeleteThis is really good, and better than the first. I really like the composition and the hard, long shadows that show the lighting was low and morning like. I also really like that I can see the texture in the cinnamon roll. great job.
ReplyDeleteThat looks very appetizing. i like the light coming through the coffee.
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